Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent time, physical punishment have been used by parents to turn back discipline to children. This people argue that, smacking children is much more sufficient method to behavior treatment. This essay will discuss why smacking children as a protective way is slightly helpful to improve children behavior.
These days, some parents believe that, physical punishments are not the best way to behavior treatment and have a negative impact on the emotional health of children. Actually, they are surely worried about the consequences of doing it, because it would make them feel scared and keep them away from each other, which will cause they hide the important issue of their life from them, so it is far important than discipline. Indeed, unfortunately there are many instances of children who are suffering from trauma caused by physical punishment around the world. These are a few reasons why this is not the best method to behavior control of children.
Despite the reasons that mentioned earlier, sometimes smacking children could be beneficial if they have not been beaten inhumanly. Sometimes they should be punished because have done something harmful to prevent doing something far more dangerous in the future. for instance, when your request about avoid doing dangerous work such as playing matches is neglected for a while, it is extremely useful that such harmful behavior should be improved using punishment. So it would be one of the preventive method to control children even though it will be argued that it is completely preposterous.
To conclude, this essay argued why some parents claim that smacking is always the best approach to turn back children discipline. Although I believe that it would be slightly appropriate to improve some unpleasant behavior of children, they must not be punished savagely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26530612245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67392805607 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2102293446 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17146961763 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732033021907 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043683769346 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119173620144 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269212436922 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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