Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
• suggest someone you think should receive the award
• describe what the person does to help the community
• suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a resident of Docklands; Melbourne and I am writing to you in regards to expressing my appreciation for your newspaper "The Age" that has decided to reward people who have selflessly helped others and brought positive changes to the community. I would like to recommend someone for the award who has contributed immensely to improve our community a better place.
Mr. James Smith, a retired Commander who is known for his Green tree movement in our community, who deserves the award more than any other person. He has worked on the Green tree movement project for the past 10 years. He had inspired thousands of people particularly the children involving them to plant trees and save the planet for the future. A year ago, his sincere dedication had brought him national recognition because of the Green tree movement. He is highly a respectable person, who is loved by his friends and neighbors.
A simple crest or trophy as a reward wouldn't match for his medals and honors which he had gained during his public service as a Commander. Hence, I would like to suggest you should make the award giving ceremony open for all.
Kind regards,
John Taylor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Docklands; Melbourne ...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ands; Melbourne and I am writing to you in regards to expressing my appreciation for your new...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... A simple crest or trophy as a reward wouldnt match for his medals and honors which h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90196078431 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64885559934 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0069527473 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231416303874 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777390946104 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712064017258 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15643340292 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751410999181 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.