The world has become smaller place because of globalization, some people dread that inevitably the culture will be disappeared as a result. To some extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Modern man is raised from bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed, accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. Likewise the globalization has changed the world completely, thus many people think that culture will be disappeared as a result. I am partially agree with the statement and discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, globalization is very beneficial for the people, because they can buy anything online with help of mobiles or laptops. Moreover, people can know about different cultures and languages with help help of internet. Furthermore, it also save their time and energy likewise they buy anything from the shops, that product can be provided them in their homes with help of internet, but also they can see more varieties of the products on the internet, when they do online shopping. After that, it is a source of entertainment likewise people can spend their time by watching playing game on their computers and watching movies, they can also communicate with their friends and relatives on the mobile phones.
On the other hand, some people think globalization is dangerous for culture of every state, likewise teenagers are attracted easily towards other cultures, due to which their culture will be vanished. Besides this, it is a wastage of money because when children or adults watch various attractive things and clothes, they are attracted to them and they also distract from their study, which can destroy their future.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But I think despite some demerits of globalization, merits cannot be neglected. But over useage of anything is dangerous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Likewise,
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Suggestion: agreed
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Suggestion: help
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Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
... help of internet. Furthermore, it also save their time and energy likewise they buy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14855072464 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73798716652 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.915541913 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194458276928 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080002323112 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678446310341 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126131088367 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393644282124 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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