Task 1:- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
explain the reason why you decline the offer
express your gratitude
explain why you like your current job very much
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Mam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the job offer in your esteemed company. I felt extremely delighted to receive the offer letter as I found the job description quite challenging and interesting.
But unfortunately, I am not able to accept this responsibility due to my personal reasons. From the offer letter I happened to know that you have recruited me for the Manesar location which is very far off from my current residence which is Noida. Manesar is around 50-60km from Noida and it takes around 1.5 to 2 hours to commute from Noida to Manesar. Being a patient of cervical spondylosis, my doctor has strictly advised me to avoid long hours travelling. So, it is extremely difficult for me join your Manesar office. Also, I like my current job a lot because of the work content and no travel time. My current office is hardly 10 minutes drive from my house and I have the flexibility to work from home as well. I can manage both my office and home quite efficiently and without much stress.
I hope you would be able to understand my situation and would offer this job position to the next best suited candidate. Thanks for considering me for this position.
Best regards,
Tejinder
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73953488372 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72842933994 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.862583425 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3846153846 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143917627577 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487047116621 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503876406768 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115556211484 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207767020086 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.