In today’s times internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
Currently, Internet has enabled people to study online courses from home, and it has become a preference for some people; while others are still willing to attend traditional classrooms. From my point of view, I am in favor of the old-school teaching method.
To begin with, participating online classes is a time saving option for people who have a tight schedule, because it does not require physical travelling in the city, thus students can save time from commuting, and spend it on more important tasks. Additionally, online schools provide a wider range of different subjects, for example, people can easily find language course for lesser-known languages on the internet, such as German and Arabic; however, due to the unpopularity, those are rare to find in physical schools.
On the other hand, classroom education still has its evident advantages. First of all, in offline schools, students are given chances to have face-to-face discussions with their teachers so that their questions could be answered immediately; however, online courses usually do not have Q&A section, which could lower students’ study efficiency. Furthermore, compared to having online courses, students can have a better study environment by learning in traditional classrooms, because they can share notes as well as have group discussion with their classmates in person, which can be regarded as a motivation for them to study industriously.
In conclusion, online education is more convenient to attend, and it also provides students more choices of various subjects; however, studying in a classroom is not only advantageous to improve students’ study efficiency but also encourage them to study hard. As such, I suggest people still choose to study in regular classrooms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45652173913 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0255857767 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5708270714 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.333333333 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.7777777778 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286099038884 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114776114191 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735248862918 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176808160277 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655402462778 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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