In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The people with enormous amount of salary are considered respectable by many citizen in small countries. However, many believes that the salary should not go above certain level and the government of a country should take appropriate measures to limit it. From my perspective, there is no harm to a country if people earn in extreme amount. This paragraph contains both side of the topic.
The economy of the country depends upon the millionaires and the people who are earning handsomely. Unlike typical citizen, these people do not save money in their bank account instead they spend gargantuan amount of money in the businesses and stocks. Therefore, the economy of the country is maintained because of the constant flow of the money. Moreover, the citizens are provided with more services and facilities within the country because of the better growth.
If the government start limiting the salary of high end employees and owners, then in some way the economy of the country will drastically decrease. Although, the flow of the salary will increase initially, after few days there will be an exhaustion because people will start saving money into their bank accounts. Ultimately, no one will be able to spend extreme amount of money in businesses. It is widely known that giant companies require massive amount of money to run and it is responsible for country's growth and economy.
In conclusion, the country's growth is dependent on the corporations and large agencies which are handled by the high skilled employees. In my opinion, the small number of people who earn extremely high salaries are beneficial for a country and its people itself. Therefore, government should not restrict people to earn high salaries.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14184397163 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68514422276 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.337599727 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286111063646 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10547362233 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962380465316 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195531266937 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118827055388 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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