The protection of the environment is one of the most important issues in the world today, but governments are not doing enough about it. To what extent do you think that individuals can help to protect the environment?
The mushrooming of environmental pollution is one of the major problems faced by the mankind in the contemporary world and it is quite true that governments have failed to arrest this trend. In this essay, I will discuss the role of common people to protect the environment.
On the part of individuals, it is their duty to take the preventive measures for the prevention of eco-system. industrialization and technological advancements are few factors, which has led to the damage of the environment. The numerous forests have been cleared as a result of industrialization, resulting the unbalance of ecological system throughout the world. Invention of technology in transportation, for instance, have raised the carbon-footprint in the environment. being a responsible citizen, people can plant more trees to compensate for the industrialization, and could promote the traditional modes of transportation such as Bicycles to lessen the effect on the environment.
On the other hand, role of government could not be neglected in the social cause of preserving the environment. government, being primarily responsible for the well-being of people and natural habitat, could enact laws for the industries, enforcing them to take preventive measures to safeguard the environment. Here again individuals can confront the regimes and could highlight the ill effects of several governmental projects, if they fail to play there part responsibly.
In conclusion, it is reiterated that if people are aware about the safeguarding of environment, appropriate measure could be taken and even governments could be forced to think responsible towards this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65079365079 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59596509696 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9683083997 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711377428983 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289041347562 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266748878055 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517926552961 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273511940536 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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