Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education has become an important factor for gaining respect in the globalized world. Societies around the globe have it made it critical to one's survival. However, there is a raging debate whereby some believe that education should be based on one's interests and not based on future prospects. In the below paragraph I will discuss both sides and put forward my opinion.
As the human race is progressing, science and technology play a pivotal role in laying the foundation for its success. Hence people around the world see roles or jobs related to science and technology as growth drivers thus they believe that if they choose similar traits and become scientists and engineers their future will be more secure. Such trends are evident nowadays where computer graduates end up in high paid jobs in Multinational companies like Google and Facebook. Similarly, graduates from science faculty end up working for pharmaceutical giants like Ranbaxy, Cipla thus laying a strong foundation for their future.
Similarly, on the other hand,<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="Similarly "></span> we see some people who like to study where their interests lie such as arts, music or sports as they believe that it will be beneficial for them to not only enjoy and excel in what they are doing professionally but also contribute to the society. such examples can be found in the past where great visionary people like Shakespeare, Edison, Beethoven who made immense contributions to the society globally.
Thus, in my opinion, looking at different facades of arguments, I conclude that it is utmost important for people studying in university to carefully choose the subjects which they want to pursue as a long-term profession to be successful and make valuable contributions to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, thus, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34265734266 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39175257425 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2875544388 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291809802526 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872879329346 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681884832879 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155194581341 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345241677441 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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