some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. do you agree or disagree ? include any relevant examples base on your knowladge end experience.
Nowadays, it is believed that optimum way to motivate and support people toil is pay employee should appropriate with they produce and sell. In this essay, I completely agree with these statement it gives more merit rather than the dimerit for some reasons.
In the one hand, the main benefit of this problem is gives some bonuses to the employee it would motivating to toil in produce and selling their product. It is because motivate will make spirit in work. Firstly, many superiors in the world intensive pay for their employee who has work well. They believed that give this bonuses it will increase the productifity and spirit. Secondly, some research found that company which has good product always guaranteed welfare the employee. Policy the company like this make worker effort to working with maximal. As result they company have product with the best quality and sold well. It is believed that company with good management has productifity and sell well.
On the other hand, some employee think if bonuses is not everything that they want. Because some of them just hope can work base on their hobbies and partiality. Taken art workers as an example, they working only want people see and appreciate with the product. It is proven that bonuses is not ardor for every workers. In conclusion, I believed that in this era there are people that work just base on the hobbies.
To sum up, it is already clear that bonuses it gives more merit rather than the dimerit. I hope every company in the world considering about welfare the employee that work in their company.
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- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement? 11
- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement? 11
- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement ? 73
- some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. do you agree or disagree? include any relevant examples based on your knowledge and experience. 11
- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement ? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
... In this essay, I completely agree with these statement it gives more merit rather than the dim...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'motivate'
Suggestion: motivate
...s some bonuses to the employee it would motivating to toil in produce and selling their pr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... spirit in work. Firstly, many superiors in the world intensive pay for their emp...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... has work well. They believed that give this bonuses it will increase the productifi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e every company in the world considering about welfare the employee that work in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85925925926 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33925175332 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496296296296 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9435106326 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1764705882 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200432445611 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689806215366 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055096186691 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127619068258 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069887934444 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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