People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
No one can deny that modern communication and convenience of vehicle are useful for job and live these days. I belive this has more benefit than drawback. In this essay, i will discuss the argument supporting the main disadvantage and advantage.
On the one hand, there are also some disadvantage. The most important is the far distance with their family. For example, when one person choose work abroad they can not come back home regularly, they just turn to home ones or two-time during holiday. As a result they lose gradually connection with relatives. A second disadvantage is the cost of transport. If you work in another country, you will pay many money for instance airplane ticket or train ticket. Consequently, your income will be considerable expensed.
On the other hand, thanks to the network global we can easily work-far away no need go to the office everyday. Such as my friend, he work for a Korea company which no had any office in Vietnam, he just need complete deadline on time and every projects will be sent by mail or Skype so he travels any tourist destinations he want. another advantage is that the road greater and greater will convenient condition for everyone transfer any place. For instance, my brother is a university lecturer in Tra vinh, he works in weekdays at school and spent his weekend for charity in vinh Long. Therefore, he can do work he loves without difficult by transport.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that the development of communication technology and transportation has more advantages because it can offer more benefits than drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
...e useful for job and live these days. I belive this has more benefit than drawback. In this...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o home ones or two-time during holiday. As a result they lose gradually connection...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...u work in another country, you will pay many money for instance airplane ticket or t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...u work in another country, you will pay many money for instance airplane ticket or train t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r income will be considerable expensed. On the other hand, thanks to the network...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Suggestion: wants
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Suggestion: Another
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that the road greater and greater will convenient condition for everyone transf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84604402373 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.742908138 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120975575653 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383116322158 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038479950227 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873192997081 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461185660022 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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