Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that wildlife protection is drawing too much attention and a huge number of resources. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the mentioned statement as wild animals and birds deserve such devotion due to their importance in our life.
There are several reasons why the conservation of wild animals and birds should be concerned more. One reason is that their existence maintain the diversity of ecosystem. A species is a link of many food chains. Therefore, if they vanish, the food chain can be affected, which poses a considerable threat to the biodiversity. For example, the wastes of whales contain the enormous amount of minerals that are helpful for the growth of seaweed, the beginning of many food chains. Therefore, if the rates of hunting whales increase, whale density may decline rapidly and algae my disappear, sending other species to the verge of extinction.
I also believe that the expenditure for protection of wild animals and birds is not too much. Firstly, funding for preserving wildlife is tiny compared to the investment on other projects like space programs or entertainment shows. Secondly, people who work in this field are often underpaid despite their great deal of effort. As a result, anime protection projects often lack staff. It is clear that if governments express sufficient concern for wildlife, the illegal hunting has not increased for recent years. In fact, killing elephants for tusks or tigers for fur is continuous annually in Africa; however, many hunters and traders have yet to be busted.
In conclusion, I disagree that authorities are devoting too much attention and too many resources to protect wildlife due to their importance for our life. I also believe that the dedication to that issue is not more significant than some other projects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77154716782 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4116418004 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238442959666 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789538098354 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101993198314 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169735527482 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919425383139 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.