You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.
Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. As you must be aware of exams, which are scheduled to start in two weeks time. However, due to unfortunate circumstances my preparations are getting halted. This is being caused by too much noise and nuisance been caused by my room mate.
Let me explain you further. As my room mate, tends to party more and study less, therefore, this causes issues for me to concentrate on my studies. Moreover, on many instances, his friends come over to visit him and party with him. There have been occasions, when I have tried to convince my room mate to avoid partying or try not to invite friends to our room. But, he has been behaving rudely on numerous occasions and has been over reacting to situation.
Moreover, on various occasions, I have seen them do drugs while sitting in the room. It is therefore, requested to either change my room mate or shift me to a new room, so that, I can concentrate on my studies properly.
Regards
Joe Tribiani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57303370787 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5533074367 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8349281932 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201780199823 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068434138155 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434854374915 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136656044993 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304867790169 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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