Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
It is nowadays, a debatable issue that felony is incessantly augmenting and there is not a single way to get rid of it. This essay disagree with the notion because various measures can be taken into account to prevent crime. The possible measures can be taken into consideration in form of creation of job opportunities as well as government should levy strict rules and regulations on offenders.
To commence with, employment should be created for every unemployed person to prevent crime. This is because, jobless people do numerous antisocial activities to generate revenue which could be resolved if, the proper employment should be rendered. For example, crime rate is the lowest in Canada because Canadian government provides job to every person, residing in Canada. Hence, the argument is substantiated that, crime can be prevented by bestowing employment.
Secondly, strict rules in form of punishments should be implied on criminals who commit crimes. That is to say that, corruption patronizes the offenders to commit crimes though, if strict punishments should be given then, fear would be created amidst them and ultimately crime would be curbed. To illustrate, Saudi Arabia has decided to give corporal punishments to every criminal which helps that country to control crime. Therefore, it can be proven that, crime can be kept in limit by imposing strict laws.
However, some offenders think that crime is the only activity to earn money as well as to live life; so, their mindsets can not be changed. As a result, government can neither change their thinking nor can stop them to commit crimes. To exemplify, government have not done anything about the famous criminal Dawood Ibrahim because of his thinking to commit felony.
In conclusion, job creation as well as strict punishments are two cardinal ways to control crimes. So, I disagree with the notion that nothing can be done to prevent crimes and it is recommended that, government should utterly take care to escape from crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17791411043 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73726216551 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7278073662 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.102777461973 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801150635104 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166079855525 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364067548576 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.