The internet has become so efficient and popular that many people rely on it for learning. Some suggest that it could replace the use of books as the main source of knowledge for education. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.
In the 20th century, people growing with the digital world. internet has become more efficient and popular that many people rely on it for learning. I extremely support it I have explore few points in below paragraphs.
internet is powerful source in all fields. I would say internet is backbone of the success. Additionally, everything is available on internet if we want to search about anything it is available on internet. Besides, with the low price of internet data it is easy to use for everyone. In term of education internet playing main role. Such as, if we have to create a project, we do not have any idea of that, and we need to search it on YouTube definitely we will get good information for it. Furthermore, without internet life is empty. Nowadays books have been replaced with the internet. student search the data on google and create their own notes and it is easy to understand when they revise it. In my opinion, students more rely on computer instead of books.
books knowledge is good but in comparison to internet, it was old thing. In modern world technologies growing up. For example, when we create nots for any specific topic, in previous days we need to go through the 2-3 books then can collect the good content. however, today's world just enter the topic of google and get the lots of suggestions. Likewise, within 1-2 minutes we get the multiple suggestions and practical videos for it.
To draw a conclusion, internet is base. using it can build a strong building. Thoughts are surrounds just click and grape it. however, books reading good in nature but for fastest world need to walk fast according to technologies speed. Hence, internet is the best source for learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Internet
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Suggestion: explored
...learning. I extremely support it I have explore few points in below paragraphs. inte...
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Suggestion: Internet
...lore few points in below paragraphs. internet is powerful source in all fields. I wou...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'searches'.
Suggestion: searches
...een replaced with the internet. student search the data on google and create their own...
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: Using
...To draw a conclusion, internet is base. using it can build a strong building. Thought...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, so, then, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62812650777 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4909631464 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9130434783 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8695652174 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27966136665 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819638676548 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908255640127 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182373312609 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530708440459 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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