pros and cons of extreme sports.
The extreme sports or adventure sports are gave popularity in some years and the all credit goes to movies because they show danger activity in very easy way. But some people says that is risk of life. The adventure sports are very risky as they sees them. I will discuss both points in further paragraphs.
One he one hand, those person who do this activity is have name and fame in all over the world. Some people have hobby to do this activity. These activities were help to increase our self confidence as well as they help to increase our physical stamina which is very important in human life. One's the person can do this activity they don't look back and the government gives the jobs to professional players which is very good thing for those person.
On the other hand, these activities is very dangerous and it is risk of life. For example the Australian professional player Austin Nathews were died while doing bungee jumping. Further, only the rich people are only afford these activities because the equipments and costumes are very expensive.
Overall, these activities are very dangerous while performing these activity firstly practice a lot and then do this in the front of gaurds or those who well known about these activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'see'
Suggestion: see
...adventure sports are very risky as they sees them. I will discuss both points in fur...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...urther paragraphs. One he one hand, those person who do this activity is have name and f...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...d, those person who do this activity is have name and fame in all over the world. So...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...al players which is very good thing for those person. On the other hand, these activitie...
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Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84186046512 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37945051399 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3783578324 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.013215628642 0.242375264174 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00485819863142 0.0925447433944 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161128220175 0.071462118173 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00941778704206 0.151781067708 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163120856517 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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