Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.
Many people think that the region effect on a success of person. If a person born and brought up in America be more successful and if a person born and brought up in India be less successful. It is wrong that the region influence the success of a person. This essay will discuss how effect of a person region on life and upcoming a particular conclusion next paragraph.
To begin with, I think Region will not effect of a successful person on life. I have many examples if a person belongs to a urban areas and be more successful. Instead, i can count many people from developing countries are way of more successful people from developed country. Everyone knows about Google Chef Executive officer Sunder pichai, He is from India and now he is earnings from millions dollars. So it is best idea that the region will not affects on a success of person.
To the other hand, Some people believe that region has a contribute to success those guys want to show the superiority of a region. I strongly disagree this if a person has a Caliber than no one can not stop him to achieve the success of life and region has not effects whose person life.
To sum up, as aforementioned, region have not effects on every persons life. Which person are hard work on day or night this person can be success on life. Region has a never effects a person success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... To begin with, I think Region will not effect of a successful person on life. I have ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ve many examples if a person belongs to a urban areas and be more successful. Ins...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... areas and be more successful. Instead, i can count many people from developing c...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...s earnings from millions dollars. So it is best idea that the region will not affects o...
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Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...t is best idea that the region will not affects on a success of person. To the other h...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...t is best idea that the region will not affects on a success of person. To the other h...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd, Some people believe that region has a contribute to success those guys want to show the ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n has a never effects a person success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48780487805 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50447415093 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475609756098 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7239367555 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8571428571 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461419550723 0.242375264174 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227009286719 0.0925447433944 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127656234261 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322700137804 0.151781067708 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345231888724 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 12.6369458128 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.5310837438 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.