When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While there are some arguments in favor of the direction for career, I disagree with the view that this should be decided by the amount of money gave per month.
The salary regime absolutely accounts for significant part in selecting job but there are two considerable drawbacks in this. In term of the quality and objectivity of work itself, employees pursue the career which they do not interested may lead to act carelessly in order to complete the entire commission rapidly. There have been numerous scandals as a result of several products being broken by inattentive workers. For example 'samsung galaxy', developed by a Korean mobile company, resulted in the explosion of thousands of mobile phones. From an health perspective, leaving the whole career chose by money may have profound psychological consequences- such as multiple sclerosis disease with proven effects which can affect you brain, spinal cord, and the optic nerves in your eyes, cause problems with vision, balance, muscle control, and other body functions.
Although salary is significantly urgent for most people across the world, it is essential that we ought to consider other factors. Firstly, the highest standard can be set by the level of passion for the job designed to fit the personality, not to break into inappropriate field. Enjoyable thus gained during job process keeping you stay with the work. Secondly, the ability to be appropriate for work environment is also need to be concerned to some extent to maintain the job. One example is my neighbor name Nam, he is extremely want to be a doctor but he is not good at studying biology and chemistry, so he is easily quit that dream.
In conclusion, salary is not solely factors to pick the jobs, we should consider other reasons.
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Suggestion: a
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...istry, so he is easily quit that dream. In conclusion, salary is not solely fact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04421768707 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72241676762 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4823258253 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115924498993 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411368203783 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322876923116 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602067430386 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279030617245 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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