It is common mowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a break down in family relationships and communication.
To what extent do you agree?
There is a statement regarding people who make use of modern technology in a familiar context that may not be healthy for the development of its relations and communication. In fact, everything should have a limit, and the exaggerated use of technological devices can destroy homes and spread people apart, therefore it should be avoided, and that is what this essay will discuss.
Although some electronic devices, such as mobile phones, tablets, and computers are used to connect people shorting distance among its users, it is common to see people becoming slaves of its own devices, losing time on social media and not giving the needed attention to what actually matters in life.
Nevertheless, the number of teenagers surfing online on improper pages or playing games not related to their ages is increasing, which may lead to negative consequences in the future. In addition, in a family context, it is important to spend time with the beloved ones, therefore, situations of having dinner together or sharing a moment at home, these pieces of modern technology should be put away in order to preserve the communication face to face with each other.
To sum up, I believe that people should be aware of the time spent online and how it may affect the relationship with all the members of a family, hence we would be able to build strong attachments, connecting ourselves with the ones that we love the most.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9539748954 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77374617223 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635983263598 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.5024630542 190% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6904305565 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.333333333 104.977214359 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8333333333 20.9669160288 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 7.25397266985 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181533317674 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784883126955 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240613270144 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936527955036 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305414735546 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 12.6369458128 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 53.1260098522 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.3980295567 169% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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