Youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. Is this a positive or a negative development?
In modern times, families have become exposed to several types of challenges. These challenges are results of the rapid change of technology which has its own impact on society and family.One of these changes is the ambition of family offspring to lease its house and live an independent live. This ambition is considered to be beneficial but it has its disadvantages.
In the meantime, teenagers have an easy access to a wide range of knowledge through the social media platforms, which have a certain impact in their motivation. According to an article which was published on New York Times Newspaper, more than 30% of teenagers are welling to leave their parents’ house in order to have a free life style and do whatever they like without any supervision.According to the same article mentioned above only 10% of these youngsters need to live alone for the reason of starting their career and be productive.
Accordingly, the benefit of this kind of development is that we can have young people to be an addition to the working force of the country. This will ease the parents’ life furthermore, they will be an added value to the country economy. On the other hand, this can result in a growing number of youth crimes which will be caused by the lake of supervision.
At the end, it is required to allow children to develop their mentality as well as earning the enough knowledge to define the correct path to follow
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, so, well, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83739837398 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92913188556 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0777441991 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.222222222 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182673275972 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642418693451 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401953551465 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995776907419 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305922857344 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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