Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that parents who are sending their children to private schools also pay tax to promote state education. Although some people assert that this trend has been a positive development, I, however, believe it has had a negative impact on parent’s budget.
Firstly, in recent years it is widely noticed that the fees of private schools have increased dramatically. While I concede that these schools offer smart classes and better facilities, the problem is an exorbitant amount of fees charged by private schools which is not affordable for all parents. Thus, it would be grateful if parents get liberated from taxes. As a result, it will reduce the burden from the parents, since educating their offsprings is a major concern for many of them.
Motivation is another area of concern. Many taxpayers will support to contribute to the government in order to maintain revenue from the education sector. However, I would argue that relaxing tax for people who prefer private education will encourage more parents to send their children to schools. Consequently, the literacy rate of the nation will increase and which will balance the amount of tax paying. In fact, the productivity of the country will escalate with the rise in a number of educated people.
To conclude, not only paying tax increases liability on parents but also discourages them to send their child to renowned schools. Therefore, although I acknowledge nation will suffer a slight decline from tax collecting, I agree that that financial concession should promote for people who opt private education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21789883268 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7155240315 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4129570879 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248299521552 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085291432207 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753194198552 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151397641123 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299898564984 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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