Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some skeptics would advocate that the level of noise should be strictly controlled. However, there are others who argue that individuals should have the right to produce noise regardless of the volume. In this essay, I will outline some following reason to support the latter idea.
On the one hand, there are several disadvantages leading to the demand to limit the amount of noise produced. The main reason is that loud noise can pose a considerable threat to the community’s efficiency. In details, living in a noisy area for a long period can cause some dangerous diseases such as headache and symptoms relating to the ears. Moreover, noisy sounds can disturb people from studying and working. As a result, these problems in health as well as the level of concentration may be a significant restriction resulting in the decline in productivity.
On the other hand, I believe people can freely make noises as loud as they want due to some reasons. Firstly, the high level of noise would be encouraged when joining in a recreational activity. For example, in the football match, shouting and cheering seem to be a motivation in order to help football players perform better. Secondly, making loud sounds is a necessary way to protect not only ourselves but also our property from being stolen. Particularly, no sooner do robbers break into our house than they can be detected easily thanks for the loud noises produced by the warning system.
In conclusion, while some people think that regulations should be introduced so as to limit the level of sound, I believe that people should have their authority to make as much noise as they want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96762589928 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76742167768 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9604741644 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297909628916 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967725026349 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101895312436 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200756767467 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102461776259 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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