Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this modern world health issues emerging more and more due to the hectic lifestyle of the population. There is no doubt in the effectiveness of the sports activities, whereas opposers allege that there are more other functioning methods to improve the health. In my point of view, sports activities are the key point in gaining success of a body and moreover, there are some other beneficial things for well-being as well.
To begin with, availability of relevant sports facilities where anyone can workout in any place undeniably affects some parametres of public health in society. First of all, these days most of the people from young ages are immersed into their own stuff and frequently forget about their own well-being. Subsequently, they do not prefer to subsidise their time and money on the gym, deteriorating general productiveness. In this case, if the government would erect free fee excersising zone or field in every neighborhood, then people would be able to release stress and recover their concentration, which are common problems over the globe. Furthermore, regular engagements with the beloved sport not only makes delighted, but burns redundant fat as well. Thus, if the government would ensure with the appropriate amenities, citizens would engage themselves with the health improving activities.
On the other hand, attracting people to get out of their comfort zone seems as more sophisticated challenge, since some folks have no desire to take care of their own body. The government should promote them via the net and social media (the second most spent time place of people), most of them would be involved in the development of health afterwards. Additionally, well-known sport stars could be a good aid to encourage the population from the earliest ages, if they would share special programmes for every physique type, so that people wold have aimed some health-related goals. Therefore, government may build sports complexes, but it is not enough for everyone to implement them.
In conclusion, governments should encourage the population to do sports activities by not only ensuring it with the facilities, but also with mental attack to take care of the well-being. I firmly believe that if the government would follow the plan, the overall condition would go up to the best levels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can work out
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Suggestion:
...of their own body. The government should promote them via the net and social medi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18933333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88524214274 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6018997805 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.733333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218789697424 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700890543288 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424277491813 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128436522574 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340007335622 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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