You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
- Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. Its been a long time since we last met. I recently received a letter from your side asking for my suggestion about whether to go to a college or try to get a job.
I believe you are at a critical juncture of your career where choosing one over the other can have serious implications. To elucidate As you have completed your tertiary education continuing your studies in the same environment will make you feel bored at certain stage moreover the nowadays trend is to gain industry experience before pursuing post-graduation studies as it helps in gaining vital industry experience and thus enhances the possibilities of getting admission in the best of the universities.
I am aware of the financial condition of your family I would strongly recommend getting a job so that you can support your family at this stage and at a later stage when you are financially stable you could pursue your post-graduation.
Since you are a computer science graduate I would recommend to look for jobs in technical roles like software testing and software design.
I hope you make the right decision and hope you to receive an update from you soon.
Warm wishes
Brain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, How have you been?. Its been a long time...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to go to a college or try to get a job. I believe you are at a critical juncture...
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Line 8, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e software testing and software design. I hope you make the right decision and h...
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve an update from you soon. Warm wishes Brain
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85853658537 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82351812644 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.152531732 44.8134815571 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296278535395 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118456587549 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139419181712 0.0603063233224 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168110787897 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980809799514 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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