The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given data represents the total number of visitors and satisfaction survey of visitors based on several categories like very satisfied, satisfied, dissatisfied, very dissatisfied and no response during the year before and after the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum.
On a glance, it is clearly seen that the number of visitors has increased very well from 74000 before refurbishment to 92000 after refurbishment. When going through the visitor’s survey there has been an improvement in the satisfied category people to 40% as it was 30% before refurbishment. The number of very satisfied people has also seen an increase to 35% when compared with before refurbishment where it was 15%. It is also seen that the rate of dissatisfaction has seen a huge reduction from 40% before refurbishment to 15% after Refurbishment. Similarly, very dissatisfied category has also gone down to 5 % from 10% with respect to the previous year. No response hasn't seen any difference and still remains the same at 5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'at'?
Suggestion: At
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, still, well, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22839506173 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25895668507 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7795594149 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226082531859 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105201996778 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659058742663 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199424864853 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403821477719 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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