Ex: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discussing about how to help poorer countries from rich countries. Some people consider that the rich countries should provide with poor countries in different aspects rather than only supporting their financial. In my opinion, I agree with this ideal.
Why the rich countries should be to support poorer countries in others different fields? Although giving money from those countries can help financials of poorer countries, however, people who live in poorer countries depends on the financial of rich countries so that it is not good for their help. Instead of the government in the rich countries should be invest into human or maybe technologies. For example, providing into their education system by assistance equipment, build more schools that improve cognitive abilities, helping them learn diversity and broaden their horizon especially children. In addition, for economic of modernization and industrialization invest into technology which is one of the best solutions in variety fields. Firstly, the agriculture which creating food and drinks from cultivation, owning helping people can self-sufficient for their life. Secondly, providing into the industry that one of the keys by the ways offer more tools, software which improving product manufacturing capacity, in other words, unemployment will have more good opportunity to earn money for themselves. Thanks to, it helps the proportion of unemployment decrease instead of the rate both of economy and living standards increase gradually more
In conclusion, I think that the rich countries have many aspects to support for the poor countries that meaning the poor counties always have a more positive outlook for their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'invested'?
Suggestion: invested
...ernment in the rich countries should be invest into human or maybe technologies. For e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, by the way, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55212355212 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9082048879 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7261842986 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9090909091 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314649372402 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13937323092 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124521561697 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232961127488 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618151381711 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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