some people work for the same organization all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organization.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
when, the work is necessary keyword for the human cycle to live in this world. several human think work in same company for their hole working life however, others think work for different company is the good way.I discuss both of points in further essay.
on the one hand, some people believe that work in same industries is good for future. There are different of jobs available which are government and private sector.if work in a same industry so government sector is the best for life time work. Several benefits of these sector which is fix working hours, time to time increment, benefits for family also. For example, If work in same organization for a long time you get good respect from all your employers.
on the second hand, we leave in that era whereas people are done anything for own satisfaction. other people think work in different organizations is better than same organization. For example if people change their workplace moreover, they increase their knowledge.
To conclude that, The work in same industry is the good for the people. They get respect at work place, several benefits from organization and higher salary. That because of In my opinion work in same organization is better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94660194175 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53324115983 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0234289232 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.622227130239 0.244688304435 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247725846085 0.084324248473 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119265011383 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388649756496 0.151304729494 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428036469356 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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