For school children, their teachers havtend e more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a common opinion that parents are considered to be the most influential persons in human’s life, although nowadays school teachers are often mentioned as those who have shaped one’s future. I to agree with latter statement and in this essay I’ll try to explain why that can be a thing today.
While parents are almost always available for communication, they often fail to use it for building real trust in relationships. Belonging to different generations, they don’t usually have many crossing points and elders may even be terminally irritated by new fashion in clothing or modern teenager’s slang. A recent research conducted by the BBC revealed that only 21% of UK school attenders above the age of 12 regularly have a consistent conversation with their parents and only 50% share their feelings. The reason to that may be hidden in the period when parents of the modern pupils were brought up and in their turn had not received enough attention themselves.
Nevertheless, tuition in schools have been significantly improving during two last decades and some studying facilities have summoned a number of professionals who not only can perfectly explain the subject, but also put a great effort into involving students mentally and emotionally. The UK Ministry of Education have reported 4 out 5 teachers in schools had mastered a special 3-year course of psychological engagement and surveys among teenagers show that 80% of them see their tutors as role models.
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- For school children, their teachers havtend e more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24380165289 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00211943893 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685950413223 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3496358631 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.625 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137429436654 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578988673303 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464511693232 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847966511022 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337673626589 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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