Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with him/her-How you will keep contact with him/her

Essay topics:

Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party
-Why you will not be able to attend
-How you enjoyed working with him/her
-How you will keep contact with him/her

Dear Puja,
I hope you are doing well. I am very Surprised to her that you are leaving work very soon . I am going to miss my Colleague very much you are the one in my working career also I am going to miss your good by party because of my holiday in this time I am away from country.
I will miss those happy moment spent with you in work place specially those funny talk and searing food in our break time.You always need food for me when we are not having a break in same time . You always support me in my work and so do I. Those moments are beautiful moment of my life and I am going to miss everything, you were very friendly with everyone especially towards me.
We are not working together anymore but we will still catchup in phone and other socialmedia , we are already friend in facebook and instagram.
I wish you all the best for upcoming future, enjoy where you are.

Your Sencerely,
Bidur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Puja, I hope you are doing well. I am very Sur...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... her that you are leaving work very soon . I am going to miss my Colleague very mu...
^^
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in this time I am away from country. I will miss those happy moment spent with...
^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...talk and searing food in our break time.You always need food for me when we are not...
^^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n we are not having a break in same time . You always support me in my work and so...
^^
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l catchup in phone and other socialmedia , we are already friend in facebook and i...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26011560694 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20916076162 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9371260672 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8888888889 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258528960314 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109489140405 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570395492775 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148004382014 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054865770311 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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