A friend you made while you studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves, say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her, explain how to apply for the job
Dear Sara,
How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met. I am writing in response to your letter which I received last week asking for help in finding a job in Singapore.
Well, it such a great coincidence that there is a suitable role in satellite services company "GE" which matches your profile. To elucidate the role is for a Solutions Engineer and is based in Singapore but involves frequent travelling in Asia-Pacific. The role also involves techno-commercial support to the sales team which includes not only includes preparing proposals but also includes giving presentations and demonstrations on new products to customers.
I believe you are an exact fit for this role as you have a strong experience in network design and understand the dynamics of the satellite market additionally with your valuable experience in Asia-Pacific region the company may be able to close more business transactions.
Thus I suggest you apply online on the company website and additionally send a copy of resume to me so that I can also send it directly send it to the hiring manager just to make sure it gives you a better chance to get a call for the interview.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Warm wishes
Brian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, How have you been? it has been a long ti...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Sara, How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for help in finding a job in Singapore. Well, it such a great coincidence that t...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...o close more business transactions. Thus I suggest you apply online on the compa...
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Line 8, column 137, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sends'?
Suggestion: sends
... me so that I can also send it directly send it to the hiring manager just to make s...
^^^^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to your immediate response. Warm wishes Brian
^^^
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...immediate response. Warm wishes Brian
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92957746479 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03489808085 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8146343157 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27903799052 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923099860467 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082114097392 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144407086178 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718634418735 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.