Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is true that industrialization is necessary for solving issues like poverty but although, it creates environmental problems like pollution. I will discuss both sides of this contentious argument and present my opinion.
To elucidate, there are myriad of advantages with the proliferation of industries but the most preponderant one being it helps to create jobs which further reduces unemployment and thus poverty. For developing countries like India and China, it is quite evident in the past century that with the growth of industries in the manufacturing sector has helped a vast majority of the population in curbing unemployment and bring these families out of poverty.
Though on the other hand it is argued that industries should be stopped as they a hazard for our environment especially the chemical and the carbon emission which are now directly impacting our environment. As can be seen from the recent trends globally that our fresh water reserves like lakes and rivers are getting polluted which can have a devastating effect on the ecological balance of our planet. Similar examples are evident from developing countries like India and China where carbon emissions levels have gone drastically higher as compared to the last decade thus making the air toxic for the local population. In the last few years governments have realized this issue and for the sake of protecting our environment, they have started a campaign to be carbon neutral which includes shutting down of many industries which burn the vast amount of fossil fuel which is a serious threat to our environment. In India, the government has already made commitments globally to reduce carbon emissions thus it is introducing renewable energy like solar and wind machines as an alternative to limit the pollution.
To conclude in my opinion though industries are a source of generating employment and reduce poverty but in the long run we must remember that industries which produce chemical and carbon waste are impacting our environment and thus our survival in the longer so, In my opinion, we must promote renewable source of energies which can help curb pollution and help in generating additional employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24011299435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92927501465 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9660905497 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.5 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169349878417 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767667782688 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564751598438 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121673619143 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547312531104 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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