Large shopping malls are replacing the small shops. What is your opinion?
It is rightly said that "necessity is the mother of invention". It was the time when small shops were able to fulfill our daily need's but nowadays Large shopping malls are serving that same purpose. I will analyze that throughout this essay.
It is well-known fact that world population has increased drastically in recent time and it has come up with its own harmful implications. As population grows, it raises the people need's and therefore small shops cannot accommodate the requirements of large-scale people. Furthermore, our busy schedule don't let us shop around whole day therefore, we prefer to visit place where we get all the things we need for our routine life. For an instance, super markets, people are preferring it over small shops as they know, it is saving of their time as well as efforts.
However, we should also make sure that we don't take the bread out of the small shops mouth. Though large shopping malls or big markets are "the need of the hour" but small shops have their own significance role in business. Moreover, basic products are always available in small shops and they are on walk-able distance from our home therefore they are easily accessible. For an instance, nearby medical shop plays a crucial role in case of an emergency as in that situation we are not obligated to rush to big medical store.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that Large shopping malls are replacing small shops because they cannot fit in with the needs of people .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95057034221 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71959145571 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8653985306 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261641852398 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100222546972 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920487126269 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18634292704 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547105414658 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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