Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
Now in the modern era, many people think that our galaxy is being harmed by human activity. While, other believe that human activity makes our galaxy a better place to live life. I will shed light on my both views with my opine and gives suitable example before proper conclusion.
On the one hand, environment is very important for every human beings because it help our to live in better condition, but our human being not care about these things and cause many pollution which is not good for our earth. Nowadays, the many people cut the trees which is known as deforestation and with help of trees person will live and they cut more and more trees day by day which is also not good for animals. Because of deforestation animals living space are also decrease. For example, some countries does not have Ozone layer which means the direct sunlight come on human body which causes many diseases like tanning and skin cancer.
On the other hand, some person believe that human activity makes our galaxy a better place to live life. Like , they cut trees for our own lives they want to live good life and build houses. Furthermore, the technology increasing day by day they make many things lie car, bike, aeroplanes. For travel one place to other.
All in all, i opine that safe our earth because when the earth was safe human were safe automatically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...laxy is being harmed by human activity. While, other believe that human activity make...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...rtant for every human beings because it help our to live in better condition, but ou...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pollution seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much pollution', 'a good deal of pollution'.
Suggestion: much pollution; a good deal of pollution
...g not care about these things and cause many pollution which is not good for our earth. Nowada...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...day which is also not good for animals. Because of deforestation animals living space a...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...restation animals living space are also decrease. For example, some countries does not h...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...galaxy a better place to live life. Like , they cut trees for our own lives they ...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter place to live life. Like , they cut trees for our own lives they want to liv...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vel one place to other. All in all, i opine that safe our earth because when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22206821739 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0296389891 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257745926109 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11290816012 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994681182896 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169718808619 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551575803525 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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