internet will soon replace books .do you agree or disagree?
Modern man has raised from bullock cart era to the computer age at a breakneck speed, with accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. Likewise, internet has become necessary thing for human, so that internet will soon replace books. I disagree with this statement.
To begin with, human will learn many things from internet, which will decrease the need of books, which causes they will not like to go to the educational institutions, due to which thay cannot achieve any thing from the teachers, because there are many well qualified and wll experienced tutors are available in the schools and colleges. Moreover, they can learn easily theoretical knowledge on the internet, but they will remain isolate from ethical values and practical knowledge.
Apart from this, When they will always learn on the internet, then they cannot make relations with other persons. Besides this, they rate of unemployment will be increased, like teachers will not get work in the schools and writers willl be also free from their work. Furthermore, over usage of anything effect on the human body, so that pupils will fully dependent on the internet, which will effect on their eyes and they will not participate in the outdoor activities, which will effect on the health.
In conclusion, it can be said that internet is beneficial for pupils, but books sre like sea, those have lots of knowledge. so that internet cannot take place of books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...like sea, those have lots of knowledge. so that internet cannot take place of book...
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...like sea, those have lots of knowledge. so that internet cannot take place of books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 6.10837438424 295% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05416666667 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55847923037 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.1521579292 50.4703680194 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235111416961 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101788998562 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068556738554 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145719463906 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348804162368 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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