internet will soon replace books .do you agree or disagree?
Recently a phenomenon of digital media has sparked an ongoing controversy which inevitably leads to a moot question, are technology overtaking print formats? where it is held view that books are forever however many hold its opposite view that to cope with the present situation one must focus on internet. In this essay I will discuss both the topics with related examples and will lead to logical conclusion
From the social standpoint, books with generations has offer a noticeable effect in the society which are rooted in the fact that its history and present developments are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an experiment which discovered that about seventy percent of people prefer to carry out books during their leisure period. Thus, beneficial ramification of printed media as an efficient source of learning can be seen.
Within the realm of technology, our lives are so much envelope in the ever-growing technological innovation. Moreover, fundamental aspects of internet has boom the market in every aspects such as office, schools, universities, medical and many other. As a tangible example, a research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that over sixty percent of students are opting internet for their research or assignments. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of e-books as the newest and best form of inventions.
To end, there are several compelling argument on both side, I profoundly believe that the benefits of internet far outweighs the significant of books. It not only creating a broader spectrum but also making life easier. Hence, the replacement of books is real in a positive way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Where
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Suggestion: many holds
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Suggestion: offered
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Suggestion: boomed
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Suggestion: many others
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...Hence, the replacement of books is real in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26909090909 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97016792802 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658181818182 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9279935804 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145459304071 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461189107418 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455209708028 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808904561037 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249954791758 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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