Prevention is better than cure. Out of country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree to the statement.
Health is, without doubt, crucial for everyone. Now the statement sparks a healthy discussion and argument whether a higher percentage of government budgets should be given to treatment or to basic facilities such as health education and other deterrent proceedings. I strongly agree to the latter because the evil must be nipped in the bud.
Along with multiple reasons, the first and most important is to provide safe drinking water and sanitation facilities. A larger proportion of people, especially in developing and under developing countries is victim of water-borne diseases such as malaria, cholera, dengue, diarrhea, and even cancer. For instance, World Health Organization, popularly known as (WHO) has recently revealed that unsafe drinking water alone causes around 2 million deaths annually. Hence, it is clear the problem is quite severe and needs to be addressed urgently. Moreover, people are unaware about in sanitation which is one of the most common problems to bring about several serious diseases. To prove my point, heaps of stinking garbage in villages, towns and metro cities are testimony of harrowing experience. Both water-logging and garbage are the breeding place for mosquitoes causing grave health problems for the residents. Therefore, it is advisable to spend money to make people aware about these booming concerns.
What is more, providing knowledge about living conditions, nutrition and revitalizing primary health care is an urgent call in order to meet the risks associated. These are the promoters of silent epidemics. To illustrate, Haryana government has started a campaign to teach students to wash their hands before they eat anything so that the bacteria and germs be destroyed before they become the reason of life taking diseases. A recent survey by renowned magazine concluded that Anemia, malnutrition and obesity are major diseases if healthy food is not eaten. So, the concerted action of the government is inevitable to root out these glaring problems. Another simple but powerful idea to meet the formidable challenges is to create awareness at grass root level. Opening health center and my safety my responsibility program are some of the laudable steps taken by the Haryana government to impart knowledge people need to lead a healthy and disease-free life. The initiative should be promoted across the country. Despite living in 21st century, a big chunk of population is deprived of common health amenities. People are still living in slum areas and unhygienic conditions causing deadly infectious diseases. Thus, it is not wrong to say that greater amount of budget to be spent to give basic health care facilities to the dwellers.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that I am not against the government move to ease people for their treatment, but providing primary health facilities and education ought not to be overlooked at any cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 832, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...my safety my responsibility program are some of the laudable steps taken by the Haryana gov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2454.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32321041215 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81977306261 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598698481562 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9584318368 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.695652174 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173312293655 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433237316052 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431483873185 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115262168916 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049622719324 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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