Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether or not to buy food online is becoming increasingly controversial. Some people chooses to order food online while others still prefer to do shopping in food stores. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in more details.
On the one hand, buying food online has many positive sides. Firstly, people can save some time, instead of going to supermarket they can use that time for something else. Other reason to do that - people can get fresh bread, juice or other product, straight from bakeries before morning breakfast starts. Also, people by ordering online can get some specific or higher quality products from farmers that they like, which does not exist in local stores. For the people with these needs, online food shopping can serve very well.
On the other hand, buying food in supermarkets gives you opportunity to have it right away on the table without waiting delivery to come. Also, in supermarkets usually food is cheaper because you don´t need to pay extra for delivery, that serves for people who not a big spenders. Moreover, in grocery store people can physically experience food quality and choose what best fit to them.
To order your food online or to buy it in supermarket is new dilemma. This essay discussed why ordering online could be very convenient in today´s high pace life rhythm where time has bigger value than ever before and why some people stick with “old fashioned” way of shopping groceries, where they do the best choice at that time by what their body needs for a next meal. I think, the best is balance between one and other, it would be difficult to shop online some spontaneously wanted chocolate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'spender'?
Suggestion: spender
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94014084507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50188971362 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.613814737 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374024403468 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134268861617 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959172681918 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243010815196 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719433925727 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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