Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Explain what went wrong with the car you rented
• Ask for some form of compensation.
Dear sir/madam,
i am writing this letter about a problem faced when I rented your car on last week of this month. Myself Balaji, I am a regular customer for your shop since it was opened. Last time, I took a Ford sedan car for rent for 2 days, but it make my journey worse.
Actually, I was set my expectation level high about your service but i am really disappointed. The car which i took has defective engine, it started to make huge noise while riding on highway. Also it emits enormous heat from engine, because of this air condition system failed. it was a tremendous experience i never faced before. Moreover, when i tried to open windows for some fresh air but that too not helped me. i was in the peak of dissatisfaction.
I believe this matter deserves your urgent attention, hoping you can settle it by refunding at least 50% of the rental charges that I had paid to your agency.
Regards,
Balaji
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear sir/madam, i am writing this letter about a problem ...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...d sedan car for rent for 2 days, but it make my journey worse. Actually, I was s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ation level high about your service but i am really disappointed. The car which i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...i am really disappointed. The car which i took has defective engine, it started t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ake huge noise while riding on highway. Also it emits enormous heat from engine, bec...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...se of this air condition system failed. it was a tremendous experience i never fac...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce i never faced before. Moreover, when i tried to open windows for some fresh ai...
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...e fresh air but that too not helped me. i was in the peak of dissatisfaction. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, moreover, really, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51497005988 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56258042974 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664670658683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.375225426 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186725942808 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538916543993 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551574435492 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125415388473 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604853968745 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.