Team sports are promoted as a great way to maintain health and build character. However, violence between supporters and antisocial behavior has often been seen during such events. If sporting events can lead to such behavior, can team sports be good for us?
Recently, the phenomenon of mainting health through sports and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate, Although contested by many the significance of complex procedures is highly regarded, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and concequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that building character through exercise can be a plus and I will analyze that throught thiss essay.
From a general standpoint, social behavior can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextericably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered current policies. Hence, beneficial ramifications of both promoting sports and this sports events apparently can be seen.
Within the a realm of public arena, antisocial behavior might increase the concequences of violence between sporters. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of sporting events.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of promoting exercise far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantage of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes but also pinpoint thorny issues' potential implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omenon of mainting health through sports and its corresponding impacts have spark...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...events apparently can be seen. Within the a realm of public arena, antisocial behav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73931623932 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16407035682 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700854700855 0.580463131201 121% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8984066575 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.3 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228175350924 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804515632633 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870972547309 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112452946286 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624334127879 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.32 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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