The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the information about favourites interests in eight different nations.
Overall, Australians and Americans take part in all activities according to the table, while people from Japan only prefer reading .In addition, reading is the sole activity that all 8 nations join in.
As can be seen from the table, about 60 percent of Canadians, Australians and Americans like watching TV in their leisure time.By contrast , the percentage of people in Korea and china like it is pretty low, around 22 percent and 15 percent respectively.The data for playing sport in 4 countries stay equally about 24 percent except for Australia is slightly higher than 6 percent.Moving to reading,the Japanese take responsibility for the highest proportion which is 62 percent and chasing behind them are Korean and chinese that stand at 60 percent.Canadians,Australians and Americans do not seem interesting in it which is only 15 percent.Many people in Canada, Australia , Korea and China prefer doing their hobbies in sparetime that remain around 45 percent that is sharply as twice as the figures for citizen in France and England. It is apparent from the table that listening to music, going to beach and sleeping are not the options for Canadians , Chinese and Koreans because the datas only remain around an very insignificant percent.Australians and Americans are the truly beach-lovers since the figures for them are 30 percent which is 10 percent higher than the data for people like sleeping in England.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2520661157 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33368705606 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.4926829268 267% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 285.326567287 43.030603864 663% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 317.75 112.824112599 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 22.9334400587 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0440604346908 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643595333385 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946728529575 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816285190466 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103733820732 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 13.2329268293 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 61.2550243902 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.3012195122 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.9970731707 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.