Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying on one place or moving in search of another place?
This argument has a lot of opinions , some of people prefer to stay in one place , and some of them prefer to travel from country to another country for their own reasons . I am fully support to stay in one place.
To start the argument , one of the reasons of travel , for good work, when a person has a work which it is good for him and can help him to live comfortably , he will feel happy. so ,lots of us travel outside our native for better opportunity .
Also , people like transport among countries to discover new country , language , cultures . lots of us want to learn new things and earn more experience . like a lot of famous people in the social media are adventures and like to try new things so , they set off around the world for that reason.
In addition , sometimes the climate plays an important role in moving to another country , some countries suffer from harsh climate ; cold or hot , so most of citizens travel to state which has mild climate maybe because it is good for their health or for tourism.
On the other hand, lots of people are forced to move from one country to another country , because their lands are suffering from wars , I have been moving three different countries since I was child until to now .
At my childhood I have been lived in Syria for six years , then I stayed in my native Iraq for two years , then because the war that happened there I forced to leave my country , so , I have been living in Turkey for about five years .
To sum the argument, even it is good and interesting to travel among countries , but I prefer to stay and live in one country especially if it was my native , for the culture , language, have friends stead long terms, and to be near your family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9872611465 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.86749601065 2.67179642975 145% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525477707006 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2175798453 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.363636364 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 45.0 5.5376344086 813% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203762672229 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972572212071 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796056530625 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119700355003 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876553314403 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.