You have been invited to speak at your old high school. Write to the school. In your letter:
Make a suggestion about what you could speak about
Find out how long you will need to speak for
Ask how many people will be there
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for inviting me to the event named ‘Tech Tornado’ which takes place every year at our school. Furthermore, I am immensely delighted and privileged to represent as the speaker for this event.
After looking into the brochure, I feel that the goal of my speaking can be to share a pivotal piece of information on other career paths like becoming a dance teacher, choreographer, costume designer because I believe these paths also bring wealth and satisfaction.
Adding to it, can you please let me know dedicated time for my speech? I am sure there must be many spokespersons too.
Along with that, it would be great if you can offer head counts to me as to understand if there is plenty of room to bring my family to the event.
Looking forward to spending a memorable evening together.
Yours sincerely,
Pushpa
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-10 | Anjanakanal D | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81841258311 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727891156463 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4886844618 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142430255929 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538887022122 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358730629401 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05803482654 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321172309772 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.