For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
Nowadays, It seems that art is no longer having a central place in the international culture while other subjects such as science, technology, and business appear to be more developed. Personally, I think, that it mainly comes from the changes that occurred in our society and that different ways have to be settled to protect art as part of our culture.
The main reason why I think that the importance of art has shrunk is that today many people pay more intention on things that matter in term of money. Consequently, fewer people feel the desire to be an artist as the income of an artist is often low, for example, an artist might have difficulties to pay his bills because living out of art is hard and take time. Moreover, I believe that the social memes have changed with the society because parents nowadays are encouraging their child to get more interest in science and not in art because it offers more work opportunities, thus, children are less interesting by art.
I thoroughly believe that art should not be put apart as it is part of our historical and cultural heritage, thus, both individuals and government have to enhance the situation. Indeed, the government as a figurehead should draw people’s attention and encourage artists through the creation of free events, for example, free expositions, art festivals… Finally, parents should hand down the culture of art by bringing their children to visit art museums and learn more about art history.
In conclusion, I thoroughly believe that because success is today measured in monetary benefits, fewer people are interested in art. However, I think that it has an important place either in term of history, culture, and creativity which is the reason why governments have to subvention artist and events while people should keep our inheritance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00655737705 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79441605451 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7628537602 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.666666667 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8888888889 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230069668144 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099814519596 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238020628234 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143458257864 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196934174318 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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