You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about the advertisement that you have made about the one-week walking tour in the Queen hills. I am extremely excited to participate in the trip, however, I am bit anxious about my fitness level.
Adventurous activities always captivate me, on top of that, I am an ardent lover of nature and your programme offers the both and hence, I truly do not want to miss this opportunity.
Having the details of the cost and the schedule in advance will help me to plan things, as I have to tell my superiors about the work offs that I am going to avail and to plan my personal activities too. Please let know the details as early as possible.
Since I am rather chubby, bit concerned whether my obesity will make me unfit for the tour. It would help if you could tell me about the precautions that I must take to take part effectively in the organized event.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Your's faithfully,
Akilan Palaniappan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: bitten
... participate in the trip, however, I am bit anxious about my fitness level. Ad...
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... bit anxious about my fitness level. Adventurous activities always captivate ...
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...o not want to miss this opportunity. Having the details of the cost and the s...
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...ow the details as early as possible. Since I am rather chubby, bit concerned ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60571428571 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60245410083 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0608450541 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123208333994 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529538420748 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643208605818 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643998027412 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625195098116 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.