Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?
It is an irrefutable fact that human's lifestyle had endured several changes from last couple of decades particularly in the sphere of food. Today most of the people choose instant food than cooking at home because as they need to compete with swifting world. There are several pros and cons of this approach which will be discussed.
Some of the most prominent reasons that put forward as a prime benefit of choosing ready-to-eat food is, it is time efficient and it convenient. Ready-made food is made up of all the necessary ingredients and cooking them is simplified either in a cup or in a box. Moreover, it is easy to use; sometime it needs hot water or just warm it up in an oven. Many working professionals use this instant food to spare the time. This can be seen in growing number of working people in U.K who resort to buy ready-made meals for convenience instead of cooking at home. These ultra prominent reasons are the main causative factors for choosing instant food.
On the other hand there are several disadvantages of choosing this domain, mainly with respect to health and hygiene. Ready-made food is made up of preservatives and non organic substances to stay longer, which are highly concentrated and some are non edible. These are stored in plastic containers to stay fresh for long time. Although the nutrition facts of the instant food labels shows the list of material used, the scientific words like "B-13" is ignored by many of the people who buy. People who are in taking this kind of food are often falling sick. This has been seen in increasing number IT professionals who are going to medical facilities for obese because of choosing to eat ready-made food as it takes less time to prepare.
In conclusion, the running world has given us the choice to take a path of healthy lifestyle or a bad one. In the above essay I discussed about the benefits of ready-made food and disadvantages of it. Now it is the choice of humans to take a stand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72988505747 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72242173983 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3465585041 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266424029404 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823075898018 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584450439875 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162432927983 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351314635679 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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