You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear sir or madam
Myself Navjot Singh, currently working as sales Engineer at team one projects International LLC located in Muscat, Oman. I have heard from my colleague that you are going to organize seminar on international trade facilitation and logistics expansion. I am keen interested in participating in workshop. Moreover, I am writing this letter to get some more information about venue , date, program ,accommodation and cost.
Firstly, I want to know about date and time of seminar workshop and each day schedule chronological sequence. Similar to citing , information about event site and some directions to reach from nearby International Airport. Secondly, I need the details about key areas on which speaker or dignities will speak. Lastly, accommodation will be arranged by your organisation or person can bear it.
Furthermore, how much total amount of financial fund required for registration and for other Amenities?
Looking forward to hear your response about my concerned information. So, I can make rough blueprint about traveling plans. In addition, enclosing my email and telephone details for further smooth conversation.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Navjot Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...for other Amenities? Looking forward to hear your response about my concerned inform...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65934065934 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14819839259 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.758241758242 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8917177977 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2307692308 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185316153778 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539726642853 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457134614475 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923267824323 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564377213921 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.