Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Few people deem that it is worthless to watch sport during free time. However, I believe that watching sport is not a waste of time, excessive hours spend on watching sport is fruitless. Furthermore, it could work as a stress-burster, whereas exorbitant hours on watching sport could hinder overall development.
Ostensibly, when people watch sport, it helps them to release their tension. This is because, human emotions are directly concomitant with sport as people can bring out their inner feelings in safer way by watching sport. For example, Cricket match between India and Pakistan always works as a peacemaker to avoid any kind of stress between them. In addition to that, by watching sport, a strong emotion of patriotism could be awaken from the citizens of any nations. However, I think that rather than watching sport for longer period of time, people should concentrate on other things which are beneficial for them.
On the flip side, there are numerous better ways to invest leisure time for the betterment of an individual. Firstly, instead of watching sport, people can play outdoor games which will be beneficial for them to stay fit. Secondly, it would be a better option to spend time with kith and kin as it will strengthen their kinship. Thirdly, people can also devote this time to pursue their hobbies such as, painting or dancing which could be useful in the future to make a career. Therefore, people should do above mentioned activities in their spare time.
By agglomerating above mentioned factors, it is concluded that though there are several advantages of watching sport, it is recommended that people should balance their leisure time to get desirable ramifications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12544802867 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6714365557 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6634638399 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353466935232 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141236927777 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085557056728 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234222767721 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383799895429 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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