Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is an irrefutable fact that human's lifestyle had endured some incredible alterations in recent couple of decades, especially in the domain of food. It is often a debatable proposition that governments should be involved regarding healthy food which is given to citizens, by introducing some stringent laws, with some people who cite that it should be left to an personal perspective. These essays will both the view points and draw an opinion.
Some people think that it should be government responsibility to make sure that people of the country are healthy, as healthy people make a nation strong. From the dawn of industry revolution in food module, there is a competition for top place to make cheap and instant food, which is leading to unhealthy food and as a result the people who are consuming that material are often falling sick. Food authority council should play a vital role to eradicate this issue as in some countries government will be responsible to bear the medical bills, which will be a burden to the country.
However for some factions, healthy lifestyle is purely depending of the individual perspective. According to them the food habits, activity patterns, diet comes from the religion and family inheritance. similarly , yoga gym and other exercise activities will be based on their time availability . Combining the above mentioned food and exercise regimes people can define their own lifestyle
I feel that the healthy lifestyle should be left to people, but when coupled with government under the banner "prevention is better than cure", it will take the level of health and medical to next level so that it will increase the standard of living of individual and country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15658362989 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83559602679 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.9926083987 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.9 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24883210739 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940002993456 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686402524626 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136504907421 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642705032863 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.