A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a Job In a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
• explain how to apply for the job
Dear John,
I'm writing to let you know about a potential job opportunity in my city.
The job title is it administrator which involves various it related duties. some of these includes managing and maintaining it asset and the network, providing end-user support, and administrating company's website. also, the job description states that there will be some application development projects as the company evolves.
The reason why I believe this employment would be better for you is because of your excellent knowledge about the field and the great troubleshooting skills you have acquired. Not to mention, the experience you've got by pursuing the internship last year at Cambrian College. Additionally, you've developed coding skills which is what the company would be grateful about if they hire you.
There're two ways to apply for this amazing opportunity: online and in-person. I'm sure you will be applying using the web. All you've to do is to browse for the company's website and click "apply Now".
The details are included in the job posting that I'm attaching with this letter. also, don't forget to attach your resume, cover letter, and most importantly any certification you got so far in your career.
let me know if you have any questions.
See you soon,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...otential job opportunity in my city. The job title is it administrator which ...
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...ich involves various it related duties. some of these includes managing and maintain...
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...t, and administrating companys website. also, the job description states that there ...
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...ent projects as the company evolves. The reason why I believe this employment...
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...cquired. Not to mention, the experience youve got by pursuing the internship last yea...
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...year at Cambrian College. Additionally, youve developed coding skills which is what t...
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... be grateful about if they hire you. Therere two ways to apply for this amazi...
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...zing opportunity: online and in-person. Im sure you will be applying using the web...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30476190476 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87461325408 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5861241408 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362219570694 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111610004688 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733424052512 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163039684115 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603269922361 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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