There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir,
My name is Gohar yab Khan and studying Civil Engineering at UET Taxila. I am writing this letter to bring your
attention towards some problems our community are facing because of your bus service.
First of all, the buses are not following the timing schedule as per your give schedule. Secondly, the
drivers are overs peeding and confronting them results in altercation.
Time schedule is a concern for students as well as for office going people. I got late for my first class at
university on several occasions. Similarly, over speeding is a threat to the commuters pedestrians.
I would like you to look in the matters in order to ensure comfortable and pleasurable journey to your
passengers while maintaining your standard.
I am looking forward for a prompt action from your side.
Yours faithfully
Gohar Yab Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Gohar yab Khan and studying C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, as for, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12857142857 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77565950979 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4046174949 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187347806078 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635902531002 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874006382864 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713249276593 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751209117311 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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