Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change?
The malls in cities have become a new trend these days. But smaller malls seems to be replaced by the larger malls of late. Some people believe that this is a negative change, while others consider it to be a positive change. This essay will discuss how this change is better for the people.
To begin with, more variety is available in the larger malls and it reduces wasting of time. Larger malls have more shops as well as more area, where brand outlets can easily accommodate more material and people can buy everything from a single store. For example, our family and friends prefer to go to GIGA Mall in Islamabad where one of the outlets of "Chen One", a clothing brand, has cloths for all age groups rather than going to different shops for the shopping of different age groups. Thus, the larger malls save peoples' precious time.
Secondly, a higher quality of things are available in larger malls as popular brands only can afford the rents of these malls. Famous brands have more revenues and they never compromise on their standard to retain their popularity. For instance, I returned my newly bought shoes to BATA as it got torn very quickly and instead of arguing, shopkeepers happily gave me a new pair and now I am their regular customer. Therefore, better quality of things can be found in the larger malls.
In conclusion, the larger malls save time of the people as well as higher standard of things are available. In my opinion, replacement of smaller malls with larger malls is a change for good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73134328358 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36869480544 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.063266038 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5714285714 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178402671518 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673517087663 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680770601349 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121572685516 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718809646688 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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